Saturday, March 29, 2014

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Chapter 2
     I run over to her and watch a few strands of her hair turn white. “Momma, Papa! It’s okay Anna, I got you.” Right then my parents came rushing in. “Aisle what happened?” “It was an accident, its okay Anna.” My parents pick her up and my momma says, “She’s as cold as ice!” “I know where to go.” My papa says bravely and pulls out a map. Me in my momma’s arms and Anna in my papa’s we run to the horses and ride out into the village following my papa’s horse. From the horse I am riding on, a light path of snow is trailing behind us, coming from me.
Chapter 3
     “Come on Nev I’m sure this is the way.” (Snort ) “What was that? It sounded like horses. I was right, it is! Come on, go faster let’s follow them! Hurry! Hurry!

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