A breeze is blowing in my face, then a gust of wind blows me off the top of the train. I'm screaming, but wait there is a hand! Reaching out for it i grab but my grasp slips, I'm falling, falling, falling. Breathing heavily and realizing it was just a dream i jolt awake. As i get up i realize the door to my cell is ajar. Slowly creeping open the door i sneak out. I make my way down the cold hallway and open the door to cart seven. It was a ballroom! The cabin boy had rushed me in here before but (i must have been to busy talking because) i did not even notice. When i got to the end of the room i saw a ladder (that probably leads to the top of the train) and the door that leads to cart six.
"Arrgh!" Quickly i duck behind a chest as the door leading from the dungeon to the ballroom bangs open. I couldn't really see who or what dashed out of the door and up the ladder, but i knew it was all black or wearing black. Everything was quiet for a little while, then i heard crashing and yelling from above. The trapdoor slammed open and the captain, a guy in black (wait that is the guy who dashed through the door), and some other pirate or so i assumed came jumping in. "She escaped!" shouted the captain. The guy in black froze looking hurt then said "She wasn't there, captain." "Crazy eye find her already!" The pirate called crazy eye turned around and i saw a fake eye on his left. He started looking everywhere and i don't know if it was luck but he didn't look at the chest. "Don't think she is in here captain." "Well what are ye waiting for? Look somewhere else!" The crew of pirates stormed into the next cart. I waited crouched behind the chest until i was sure they were at the back of the dungeon. Then i jumped up and silently slipped into the mystery cart.
Once i was in the cart i realized i was in a coat closet! What is so mysterious about a coat closet? My mind drifted to the trap doors on the roofs. Maybe there is a secret entrance! Searching every inch of the closet, i finally find a remote. As soon as i picked it up the door behind me and the coats in front of me disappear. The remote is shaped like the letter P and has three buttons. They are all black with white letters on them. First, the one closest to the left is a triangular button with a L on it. Second, the one in the middle was a square with a B on it. Third, the one closest to the right is also a triangular button with a R on it. Strangely the third button was glowing slightly. It seemed like i was thinking for hours but i finally decided to push the third button. Something was moving my hair but other than that nothing else happened as a result to pushing the button. Suddenly i was in a whirlwind that was cold and icy. Ten seconds later i was thrown into a cozy room filled with light.
As i stood up i saw three glowing containers in the middle of the room. Looking in the containers i realized there was one glowing leaf floating there in each container. I looked around on the container and saw a little door latch. As i start to reach for the latch i hear shouting and yelling coming from behind me. They are probably in the closet room thing. Before they burst through i flip open the latch.
Congratulations, you got written before school started. What an imagination you have! You've got me hooked. I can't wait for chapter four.
ReplyDeleteHi Emma! This Chapter was a lot better. I love the way you write! Keep going!
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I'm still waiting for chapter four
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